Thursday, July 23, 2009

Friday 7/24/09 - "FIRST KISS"

(sealed tenderly with a first kiss)

"FIRST KISS"

The summer night was dark and fresh.

It was my first hayride and blind date -
on our way to a carousel park overlooking the river - cushioned in sweetness.

Glowing lights, gaily colored horses - I'm reaching out, grabbing a brass ring.

Sixteen and never been......

That magical night in hay sealed tenderly with the first kiss.

Prayer Girl



(Photo credit: http://hypezgirl84.deviantart.com/art/Kiss-me-27671232)

FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
Friday Flash 55 is a story
written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.

16 comments:

Steve E. said...

Hey, I don't remember that...where was I? I know, I was on a houseboat asleep holding a half-empty(!) bottle of vodka on mt chest, with a gallon of White Port in the fridge.

Happy D
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ciara said...

very sweet 55...great job :)i'm up at ramblings.

CJ said...

Nice entry for Flash 55. I've had some absolutely wonderful blind dates (one resulted in my my first kiss, too) and I've had some that I wanted to run away from ----screaming.

My Flash 55 is here:
Just Say "No"

Kay said...

oh, oh, oh....the first kiss....love that pic, and the girlish butterfly feeling aroused with the thoughts of the first kiss....thanks!

Hootin' Anni said...

How romantic!!!

Mine's posted if you'd like to read 55 words of my encounter with the MIB!

Just Be Real said...

Very sweet dear one. Thank you for sharing.

Syd said...

I remember my first of a lot of things. Thanks.

Gin said...

Ahhhh the innocence and beauty of the first kiss. Beautiful 55 PG. Have a wonderful weekend.

Fandango said...

You humans are so romantic.
Nice 55

Ours is posted

HERE.

G-Man said...

PG...
I really liked this one!
Great 55.
You captured the essence of the theme on this one!
Have a Wonderful Week-End...G

Gabriella Moonlight said...

You know what PG...you really need to just start a poem blog...you are truly gifted, in it's succinct nature this blog is amazing!!!!
Thank you for sharing the "first" kiss.

G

Cat said...

Lovely 55 PG - LOVELY!

Dr.John said...

I love romance.
What could be more romantic than a first kiss?
Very good 55

Mine is posted
HERE.

Jadey said...

TGIF Prayer Girl,

I love this. How sweet to remember that first kiss great 55 and mine is up.

Mama Zen said...

This is so sweet and lovely!

Mona said...

awwww! That is so sweet!