"PARTING"
PARTING
Close friends of mine
Passed on the tide
Like shells being swept aside
Glinting with a green bright glow
Same close-felt friends
Carried on current wide
Brushed softly by my side
Leaving seeds of green to bind
And we flowed on - apart
As divergent waters wide
Floating afar each others' paths
Separate tides still left to ride
But the verdant pieces
Left clinging - grow
Surrounding, rounding, bounding
Affixed forever as I flow
Prayer Girl
5 comments:
Beautiful Prayer Girl. I love reading poetry. There is a wonderful site you should check out www.poetrysoup.com You can post and read all the poetry you want!
hugs and a very Merry Christmas to you and yours.
~A
This brings light... I know the feelings and exeriences of this poem. Thank you!
Beautiful imagery in the poem and beautiful images of the shells. I like the chambered nautilus so much. It has been the subject of poetry in the past.
Wow the imagery and the poem are amazing...all I can say is thank you! Have a beautiful Christmas!
G
Loved this one PG!
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