Monday, December 22, 2008

Tuesday, 12/23 - "PARTING"
































"PARTING"


PARTING
Close friends of mine

Passed on the tide
Like shells being swept aside
Glinting with a green bright glow

Same close-felt friends
Carried on current wide

Brushed softly by my side

Leaving seeds of green to bind


And we flowed on - apart

As divergent waters wide

Floating afar each others' paths
Separate tides still left to ride

But the verdant pieces

Left clinging - grow

Surrounding, rounding, bounding

Affixed forever as I flow

Prayer Girl

5 comments:

Atiyanna said...

Beautiful Prayer Girl. I love reading poetry. There is a wonderful site you should check out www.poetrysoup.com You can post and read all the poetry you want!
hugs and a very Merry Christmas to you and yours.
~A

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...

This brings light... I know the feelings and exeriences of this poem. Thank you!

Syd said...

Beautiful imagery in the poem and beautiful images of the shells. I like the chambered nautilus so much. It has been the subject of poetry in the past.

Gabriella Moonlight said...

Wow the imagery and the poem are amazing...all I can say is thank you! Have a beautiful Christmas!
G

Cat said...

Loved this one PG!