Saturday, December 27, 2008

Sunday, 12/28/08 - "MY MIND"

"MY MIND"

From Christmas to Today
Mind goes "bong", "bong"

- - Back and Forth
- - From This to That
- - From Here to There

This means:
It's all about me
- - Nothing is about me


Give me isolation to the extreme (stay at home, watch T.V., read, sleep, T.V., read, sleep)
- - Give me friends to love, talk to, enjoy time with, be with, comfort, be comforted by


Give me simplicity to the max, life in black and white
- - Give me life in technicolor


Retirement from blogging
- - Coming out of retirement


Inside a mind can be a
dangerous place to spend time!

MY MIND
I step as if outside myself
Staring in to see
The many simple landmarks

Known specially to me


But before me stretches long and steep

A passage of debris
A cluttered, junk-filled corridor
Items tossed disorderly

A faint glow penetrates the waste

Spreads slowly to the fore

Then with a sudden gale storm force

The light sweeps clear the way


And the passageway's left filled and bright

The wasteland's disappeared

The tunnel way my oft-trod route again

A known and trusted way

--Prayer Girl

(Photo credit: Shut me up by Subtle Emotions Club)

10 comments:

Gabriella Moonlight said...

I have to admit that the poets who are here in the blogosphere amaze me; this poem just blew my socks off; I read it three times; once outloud to my DH. Thank you so much!

Love,
G

~Tyra~ said...

I liked this.

J-Online said...

Gosh "Inside my mind can be a dangerous place" really spoke to me. I needed to hear this today. Thanks PG. ML, Jen

Shadow said...

what a brilliant poem!

steveroni said...

Gabriella, does DH mean "Designated Hitter"? If ya don't know, ask your DH -GRIN!

Prayer Girl, I've known you for nearly twenty years, and you still amaze me with the talents I did not see before.

Ya gotta keep on blogging, as embarrassing as it might be, some times.

Love
Your DH. NOT your Designated Hitter!

LADYBUG said...

Beautifully writen! I will keep coming for more. nice meeting you!

Hope said...

I simply love this.
It says so much.
So much.

♥Shann♥ said...

lol I can relate so much with the isolation read sleep watch tv

Cat said...

Amazing beauty and truth in what you wrote PG - wonderful stuff!

Have a happy new Year with your Designated Hitter - hehehe!

Zanejabbers said...

My mind is a very dangerous place to be. Loavely Lovely poem. Thanx.