"TOGETHER"TOGETHER
Sitting silently along the bank
Our fingers sift soft sand
Seeps through every slender valley, crevice, turn
Turns round into another notch
We twine our minds - twist, convolute
Sand - slow, gentle wanderings in and out
Turning, rolling through the swirlings of our minds
Together, now flowing into glittering channels deep
Studded with stars, larger stars - rays of sun
Glance off the crystal glistening flow
Moving faster, faster, speeding into the sequined night
Hard torrents cutting back and forth
Into the farthest unknown light
Crystallized together into every trace of time
Prayer Girl
6 comments:
PERFECT closing line...
Reading this, I received several interpretations, all of which seem valid. Maybe that is how I should view art, poetry, music. Take, and use, whay is good for me, what seems right now, what might change if another time.
Thanks to you, Ptayer-Girl.
Yes, together is good.
Beautiful.jeNN
I love the rhythm of your poems. By the way, you might pop over to David McMahon's blog. He does poetry. I went over from Steveroni's blog.
this is amazing. you are very talented. thanks for sharing something so passionate. love you prayer girl. thanks for your kindness and support of me.
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