Thursday, January 7, 2010

Friday 1/8/10 - "GREEN EYES"




FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55

"GREEN EYES"


They fill his mind in every moment, either side the veil of sleep.
Concentric, hypnotic, exotic, eccentric, eclectic, romantic, mystic.

What secrets hide behind those captivating emerald eyes?

What wisdom sparkles in their shining depths?

He is enthralled, enchanted, obsessed, possessed.

He sees himself mirrored there in those infinities of green.
He is in love!



Prayer Girl

(Photo credit: Green Eyes by M. Pomorina)


Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one

and read the ones of your fellow writers.

15 comments:

Andrea said...

Great poem!
Blessings, andrea

G-Man said...

Oh My PG!!!
My heart is THUMPING!!!!!
Excellent 55 My Dear...
You always paint a masterpiece with your beautiful words.
Thank you for this lovely treasure, and have a Wonderful Week-End...Galen

clean and crazy said...

beautiful work this week, i got one up too!!

Kim A. said...

Nice 55 that goes so well with the picture. Did the picture inspire the 55 or vica versa? Tres Bien!

Namaste

ciara said...

gosh, isn't it amazing what we feel or think when we are in love? great 55. i don't know if i'm gonna join this week. i do plan on getting back to 55 soon though. :0)

Larry said...

Totally awesome poem I loved it and glad I showed up here this week. I look Forward to reading you next week. I'm posted also just follow the link below.


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Steve E said...

Prayer-Girl, you have become a true wordsmith. A really good "55" piece.

Brian Miller said...

beautiful 55. i love getting lost in her eyes, though they are hazel. smiles.

mine is up!

Hootin' Anni said...

Whoa.....love it.

HERE is mine --scroll down below my show n tell as always. Happy Friday.

Shadow said...

wow, captivating!

sarah said...

oooh. I love this. I read it outloud and it flowed and filled me with a sense of happiness. Love...nice

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...

oh I love how G-man used the word paint... the imagery that I have in my mind is electric from reading the words you 'painted' on the canvas of your blog!

What a beautiful feeling it evolkes

Mama Zen said...

What a hypnotic rhythm! I love this one!

Felicitas said...

So lovely and original, PG! A terrific 55!

Brother Frankie said...

in love and is love..
HE that is.


be blessed
brother frankie
a man who blesses