Thursday, January 21, 2010

Friday 1/22/10 - "TIME WOULD TELL"




FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55


"TIME WOULD TELL"


The convertible leaving white wispy plumes in its wake jetted down the narrow road.

She sat sideways in the tiny bucket seat, her mysterious, beautiful eyes finding me through those golden locks.

Her fixed gaze penetrated those helter-skelter tresses.

What was behind that look? Good-bye or the birth of a magical relationship?

Time would tell!


Prayer Girl
(Photo credit: Flowing by VitreousFlower@deviantart.com)



Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.

23 comments:

Susan Anderson said...

I'm picturing a little girl or a baby...am I right? All beginnings are maggical once you get a clear look through helter-skelter tresses. Great 55
I'm up right HERE

G-Man said...

Prayer Girl...
What a treasure you are!
I Loved this 55.
Only Time will tell.
You Rocked The Whole Sunshine State with this one BABY!!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Mike Golch said...

Interesting

Kim A. said...

My first car was a convertible, okay, it was my mom's that I got to drive but it was mine when I was driving it. :-D Great 55..my hair wasn't wispy..more like bushy...

Namaste

sarah said...

great 55. Sarah

Andrea said...

Blessings, andrea

Ronda Laveen said...

A glimpse into the future and very well told.

Janna said...

Almost sounds like it could be the lyrics to a song. :)
Nice!

Thanks for doing Friday 55!
You can read mine right here.

Just Be Real said...

Great one dear..... blessings

otin said...

That was great! Usually when I got that look it was goodbye, haha!

Brian Miller said...

oh this one was great. like the beginning of a movie. i am sure the eyes will tell. great 55.

mine is up!

Hootin' Anni said...

Mysterious indeed! Leaving us wanting more than just fifty five. [or is that the speed she was driving?]

My 55 is HERE, scroll below my show n tell stuff.

Happy Friday.

MIke Kilgore said...

Now here's one that can be read many ways....I love a 55 that makes me ponder! Nicely done...

Kathy M. said...

Helter-skelter tresses. Love that. Very cool.

Lou said...

Oh, is she on her way to an AlAnon meeting..LOL

Shadow said...

this sounds delightful, exciting, intriguing!

clean and crazy said...

awesome i agree with g-man you are truly a treasure and i love your 55!! mine is up too

Syd said...

I am in suspense.

Susan at Stony River said...

So many possibilities in their past and future -- great fun in 55!

Jennifer said...

Oh this is good, please continue.

Peter Stone said...

Loved it, and leaves us with so many questions, sometimes 55 words just aren't enough, LOL.

My 55 is HERE

Peter Stone said...

Hi PG,
Thanks for visiting my blog too :)
Here's a link to my tinnitus testimony, just in case you're curious n all here

Larry said...

Whoah this is nice I like it very good job. I look forward to reading next weeks.


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