Thursday, November 5, 2009

Friday 11/6/09 - "BETWEEN THE ATOMS"


FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55



"BETWEEN THE ATOMS"

It slipped into my soul on breath of gentle breeze
Arrived on unseen angels' whispering willowy wings
Came captured in the wispy Queen Anne's airy lace

Was layered in the vibrant colors bright, as butterflies alight


Thank God my gaze was held between the atoms' silent spiraling spaces small

For there, was love, in all

Prayer Girl

Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.

Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.

24 comments:

Syd said...

I remember how much I like Queen Anne's lace flowers as a kid. I don't see it much in this area--I guess that it's not the right soil or maybe it's too hot. Thanks for the reminder.

Brian Miller said...

your words far outshine the beauty even in that picture. sigh. marvelous 55.

mine is up!

Tall Kay said...

And there is love in all you do! Exquisite 55! Do the colors keep changing here or is it just my imagination?

clean and crazy said...

this does take me back, to the northwest corner of America, we used to go up to Washington every year, via the I-5. man what a view the drive was going up the coast then jotting over to the grapevine. great 55, mines up too.

g-man said...

PG...You are One Classy Lady!
Beautiful story, picture, and thoughts!
Thank You so much for honoring us.
You Make Friday's Fun.
Have a Wonderful Week-End...G

Steve E. said...

Hey this is really GooooD!

Monkey Man said...

I enjoyed the alliteration. A fine, fun 55. My 55 is up and HERE.

DreamDancer said...

This is beautiful PG! I love the colorful butterflies and flowers...refreshing :)

Just Be Real said...

Absolutely beautiful PG! Thank you! Blessings for your Friday!

Shadow said...

what a picture you've painted!

Hootin' Anni said...

Simply beautiful!!!
This is ONE PERFECT 55.

Mine is Pepper Sprayed today. Click Here and scroll down beyond my Friday's Show n Tell to find my 55. Have a glorious weekend.

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...

I felt the flutter of lace and wings.

Dr.John said...

A peek into a free soul in 55 words.
Well done

I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

HERE.

Chef Kar said...

Beautiful PG, again a fabulous picture painted with heartfelt words.

My 55 is posted: Flash 55 ~ Awakening

Gabriella Moonlight said...

PG...how amazing this piece is, it's elegant and peaceful wording is amazing, and reflects the hands and the heart that writes it...thank you as always!!!!

Love you
G

Paula said...

So beuatiful. A fresh brise between the atoms. Love Queen Anne flowers. Have a wonderful weekend

Lou said...

A nice reminder of the love that is free for all our enjoyment.

Gin said...

Love it!

Inky said...

WOW this is awesome.. I to love Queen Anne's lace.

A touch of class from a classy lady. have a great weekend.. HUGS

Mama Zen said...

This is just lovely, PG!

sarah said...

this is so gentle like you. and the picture is amazing. The colors are brilliant. Your words, your blog, your pictures say so much about ho you are...thanks PG. Sarah

mile191 said...

I think I will today...this is nice. I find your light in your words.

hugs, mile 191

enchantedoak said...

Between the atoms, you found a living peace and a living love. This was wonderful. I added you to my blog roll so I can see when you post.

Mona said...

That is really a great picture that you paint!