Thursday, August 6, 2009

Friday 8/7/09 - "THE CALF"


FLASH non-FICTION FRIDAY 55

"THE CALF"

He limped with crippling pain from a badly strained calf muscle.

She placed her hands there and heat like a hot oven poured in.

The pain began to pull back from the outer calf areas, slowly shrinking inward into a tiny ball.

Suddenly he jerked as the knot of pain jumped out of his leg.


Prayer Girl

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17 comments:

Shadow said...

now THAT is healing.

Mona said...

Ah! A healing touch is such a blessing!

Just Be Real said...

How cool is that! Love the story today PG! Blessings and hugs to you and the Stevie man!

Gin said...

My husband's hands used to have that heat. It was amazing when I had a sore muscle and he would rub it for me. It was the heat from his hands that helped more than anything. Now, unfortunately, that heat is no longer there.

Fandango said...

One of the dragons has a terrible cramp in his leg do you think we could get her to work on him. It seems like a perfect answer.
Great 55

Ours is posted
HERE.

clean and crazy said...

love the post great 55, watch out for those dragons, the like to lure sweet ladies to their lair!!

Tall Karen said...

Great story of healing hands. Something tells me this may not be fiction...Happy Friday to you :)

Dr.John said...

Boy do I know that feeling.When my leg cramps there is nothing like Betty's touch to work it out. Love conquers even cramps.
Very well done 55

Cat said...

Ah the healing touch!

Syd said...

I think that I need that in the night when I get leg cramps. Instead, I walk around until they go away. Hot hands---like that.

James Oh said...

wow, a magic touch. PG

Lou said...

Nice gams!

Take care of your hot hands too.

Alice Audrey said...

I could use some of that.

Zanejabbers said...

Will the pain really be gone?
Will he be able to walk normally again?
Will she share her healing strength with others.
TUNE IN ON THE NEXT DAY WITHOUT A Y IN IT FOR AN UPDATE.
Only the Shadow Knows.
Just silliness I know but thats where I am today. Good post.

♥ Boomer ♥ said...

WOW!!!

I think I will try this 55 some time. I'm inspired by the participants - and challenged. This was wonderful! ♥

Thanks so much for coming by here today and sharing your perspective. I really appreciated it.

Madison said...

Wow, that guy has a nice leg!

Susan at Stony River said...

I could use a touch like that, many days! You made the moment come alive--great 55!