Thursday, December 10, 2009

Friday 12/11/09 - "ICICLES"


FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55


"ICICLES"



Outside the wind howled - twisting through suspended icicles - the silent earth so cold, harsh.

She moved inside where still the frozen air reached out like tentacles wrapping around her body.



Spikes of ice fell with dull thuds into her mind, heart, soul.

She was frozen in time, incredulous, only a miracle could thaw her now.


Prayer Girl



Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.

THANK YOU AUDRINNA
FOR GIVING ME THE FRIENDS AWARD!
I APPRECIATE IT AND IT WARMS MY HEART!

14 comments:

Mojo said...

When along came a blue Dodge Dakota 4X4 with a churlish disagreeable old man in the driver's seat and a cantankerous black Lab mix in the back seat.

"Need a lift?"

Tall Kay said...

I remember those spikes of ice through my soul. Awesome 55!

Hope you got your decorations done! Have a great weekend!

Zanejabbers said...

The picture of the icicles really brought two teeny tiny warts on my chest to attention. BRRRRRR.

G-Man said...

What a beautiful 55, and what beautiful imagry.
Such a classy Lady!
Thank You for this wonderful contribution, and have a Fantastic Week-End...Galen

Larry said...

great flash 55 I liked it a lot and enjoy reading your flash fictions. I'm posted also just follow the link below.


Happy Birthday Galen

Roxy said...

Reminds me of the time I spent in the icy cold part of a small city in the middle of nowhere.. winds that cut me to the core, brrrrr!!!! Thanks for the 55!

Hootin' Anni said...

Oh my goodness...I can't get past the freezing - I hate cold. Your 55 is chilling.

Love Mojo's comment.


My 55 is all the "F WORDS" this week. Here it is...don't be alarmed tho...trust me

Brian Miller said...

great 55. i feel that cold in the mmories of times past. thank goodness for miracles.

mine is up!

Just Be Real said...

For congrats on your award! Ooooweee what a picture! Lovely and your 55 is as well. Blessings PG!

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...

BRRRR :) GOOD COLD STUFF!

Lou said...

I was expecting you to write she was on the way to an AlAnon meeting and not wind, or snow, or rain would stop her..LOL

PS the name you requested has been added. Love,Lou

enchantedoak said...

Happy Friday, cold girl! Stay warm.

Audrinna said...

Love ya my friend

Monkey Man said...

That shot is so frozen in time. Great visuals. Great 55.