Thursday, October 15, 2009

Friday 10/16/09 - "ANOTHER DOOR"


FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55

"ANOTHER DOOR"

She flung open the door.
Relief flooded her!

It opened onto a backyard patio, but as she looked both directions she saw identical houses, identical patios.

She heard the rumble of an engine.
Her heart was exploding from her body.


She jerked; eyes flew open, and awoke with her kitty nestled, purring by her neck.







Prayer Girl

Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.

16 comments:

g-man said...

Prrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect....
Lovely 55 Prayer Girl!
You have free reign to use any format you wish.
Thank You for being such a beautiful soul.......G

Brian Miller said...

nice. i like it. the kitten at the end gave it a nice warm twist. happy friday!

DreamDancer said...

Awwww, too cute!

Just Be Real said...

Awwww so ever sweet! Blessings.

Anonymous said...

Awwwwwwww ~ such a cute kitty. And such a happy ending to the story of scary doors!

My 55 is posted here.

Have a wonderful weekend.

Chef Kar

Dr.John said...

I love a 55 with a little mystery.
Nice surprise ending.
Great 55

I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.

Kay said...

captivating!

clean and crazy said...

i love your 55!! recurring dreams?

Tall Kay said...

What a surprise ending! I'm glad it was just a bad dream. You are so creative with these 55ers. I think that purrrfect is the right word! Happy Friday PG!

steveroni said...

"Honey, what's happening?" Oh, nothing, Sweetie...

"Well, did you have a nice nap?" Ohhh, my--YES!


PEACE...and love that cat with the fleas! And YOU!!!
--grin!

Syd said...

My cats sleep on my back each night now. They just want warmth.

Paula said...

Love the kitty twist! You have such a way with words! Sorry I havent been around lately but now Iam up and about again, catching up with reading my fav blogs :-)) Hugs to you.

Susan at Stony River said...

What a dream to wake from---but what a wonderful way to wake! I enjoyed going from relief to tension and back again; loved it!

Unknown said...

This is brilliant. I love the sounds of kittens purring. One time I was napping and had two of my four kittens next to me at the time purring, and it was really that joyous source of miracle from the universe. I loved it and this brought that moment back to me...thank you!
Love
Gabi

Dulçe ♥ said...

Ooooh.. this is SO beautiful and the picture of the cat, awesome... who was going to expect such a great end in this?
HUGS

Wait. What? said...

Suprise endings are the best!