Thursday, October 15, 2009

Friday 10/16/09 - "ANOTHER DOOR"



She flung open the door.
Relief flooded her!

It opened onto a backyard patio, but as she looked both directions she saw identical houses, identical patios.

She heard the rumble of an engine.
Her heart was exploding from her body.

She jerked; eyes flew open, and awoke with her kitty nestled, purring by her neck.

Prayer Girl

Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.


g-man said...

Lovely 55 Prayer Girl!
You have free reign to use any format you wish.
Thank You for being such a beautiful soul.......G

Brian Miller said...

nice. i like it. the kitten at the end gave it a nice warm twist. happy friday!

DreamDancer said...

Awwww, too cute!

Just Be Real said...

Awwww so ever sweet! Blessings.

Anonymous said...

Awwwwwwww ~ such a cute kitty. And such a happy ending to the story of scary doors!

My 55 is posted here.

Have a wonderful weekend.

Chef Kar

Dr.John said...

I love a 55 with a little mystery.
Nice surprise ending.
Great 55

I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

But it’s a groaner.

Kay said...


clean and crazy said...

i love your 55!! recurring dreams?

Tall Kay said...

What a surprise ending! I'm glad it was just a bad dream. You are so creative with these 55ers. I think that purrrfect is the right word! Happy Friday PG!

Steve E. said...

"Honey, what's happening?" Oh, nothing, Sweetie...

"Well, did you have a nice nap?" Ohhh, my--YES!

PEACE...and love that cat with the fleas! And YOU!!!

Syd said...

My cats sleep on my back each night now. They just want warmth.

Paula said...

Love the kitty twist! You have such a way with words! Sorry I havent been around lately but now Iam up and about again, catching up with reading my fav blogs :-)) Hugs to you.

Susan at Stony River said...

What a dream to wake from---but what a wonderful way to wake! I enjoyed going from relief to tension and back again; loved it!

Gabriella Moonlight said...

This is brilliant. I love the sounds of kittens purring. One time I was napping and had two of my four kittens next to me at the time purring, and it was really that joyous source of miracle from the universe. I loved it and this brought that moment back to me...thank you!

Dulce said...

Ooooh.. this is SO beautiful and the picture of the cat, awesome... who was going to expect such a great end in this?

Cat said...

Suprise endings are the best!