Thursday, October 8, 2009

Friday 10/9/09 - "DOORS"



FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55

"DOORS"

She turned the key in her door, opened then closed it, and knew instantly something was terribly wrong.

She smelled fresh paint. Why? She turned and saw white walls, strange furniture. Not her home.


Panic!


She flung the door open - another exact same door, yanked again - another.


She ran to a door across the room.

TO BE CONTINUED

Prayer Girl (Photo credit: doors by mrkillzo)

Flash Fiction Friday 55

is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one

and read the ones of your fellow writers.

18 comments:

Monkey Man said...

Fun. Can't wait for the continuation. My 55 will be up in the morning.

Brian Miller said...

wow. feel like i am trapped in an m c escher picture. interested to see where this one goes...great 55.

Steve E. said...

You could keep an old(er) man living a whole extra year writing serials like that, PG.

Yep you are a real Peep...

Peace...and love!

Chef Kar said...

I do so love a cliffhanger ... I'll be back next week, salivating for more :-)

My 55 is up HERE. Enjoy your weekend.

Chef Kar

jabblog said...

Oh my - a fresh take on Alice in Wonderland? Intriguing . . .

Just Be Real said...

Oh oh..... waiting for the next installment....

Hootin' Anni said...

To be continued? Oh.....man, you had me going. Now I hafta wait 'til next week.....


Mine's posted below my Friday Show n Tell...it's kinda creepy this week.
Here's the link
Click for my 55

Dulce said...

Hey! This is good... but unfair. A need to know what happens next arises...
Good 55!!
Have a nice weekend!

clean and crazy said...

this sounds like a recurring nightmare i have had before!!

Jadey said...

I look forward to reading the continuation. My post is up. Have a great weekend.

Gin said...

Oh I can tell this is going to be good because it already is!!!

g-man said...

You know...I HATE serial 55's.
They don't tell the story in 55 words!!
This is Flash Friday 55 NOT Flash Friday 110, or Flash Friday 165, or Flash Friday....(get the point?)
But anyway, all that crap aside..
Terrific 55(?) PG!!!!!
You are such a great talent, and beautiful soul that how can an overfed, long-haired, leaping gnome such as myself, ever disparage anything that you do?
I can't....And you are free to use any format you wish My Dear..:P

Have a Wonderful Week-End...G

Dr.John said...

Fine 55- You have my attention

I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

HERE.

Cat said...

I love the ones with a longer story line - suspense!@

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...

gahhhhh don't you know what immediate gratification junkies we are???!!!

Suspense suspense!!!!

(((calming breath)))

Something else to look forward to :oD

Lulda Casadaga said...

There is something oh so mysterous about what's behind the door...great job! Look forward to more!!

Mona said...

this sounds like one of my dreams ( Nightmares?) :D

Syd said...

Uh oh...another continuing saga. Your last on the Box was great. I'm in suspense already.