Thursday, March 25, 2010

Friday 3/26/10 - "SILENCE"




FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55


"SILENCE"

Silence
Hushed hallowed space
Outside sounds all around
Of birds and breezes
Of running in the rain

Inside total silence reigns
Exquisite interior quiet
Peace and prayer exist
There in that universal union
One with God

All is still, sweet silence
No note, no tune, no word
Just miracle muted music pure
Love's power sure




Prayer Girl
(Photo credits:
still winter by luvne32
silence by vebri rizcha carolin@deviantart.com)


Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.

25 comments:

Brian Miller said...

miracles muted music...such sweet silence...great 55!

mine is up!

G-Man said...

PG...
It's obvious where you get your inspiration.
Every one of your stories reads like a beautiful prayer.
Prayer Girl!!
Thanks for playing today, and have a Quiet but Kick Ass Week-End!!
G

Mama Zen said...

This is gorgeous!

Syd said...

I like the silence after a snow. Luckily, there isn't any snow forecast.

Andrea said...

AWESOME!!

Peter Stone said...

Simply wonderful, especially loved the last line about the miracle muted music pure.

My 55 is Twisting Roots

Enchanted Oak said...

That's a lusciously quiet meditation, with a stunning photo, too. I can almost hear the faint tones of a violin.

Steve E said...

Hey PG...this poem is EXCELLENT! I am happy to see you are inspired once again to write your "55" in that genre. Actuall I loved it--I love silence, except for key-sounds tapping in front of my computer.

PEACE. Love.

quilly said...

I know the peace of that silence. There is nothing sweeter.

Shadow said...

perfect soothings silence! i love this pg!

Just Be Real/God Whispers In The Wind said...

Great one PG. I can always remember snow muffling the sound of things. Blessings.

Vodka Logic said...

Very nice perfect for an early am read... lovely images to go with the poem

järnebrand said...

No note, no tune, no word...
Silence described in the most beautiful and peaceful way.
I loved this.
/Jo

My 55 is about Earth Hour...

Hootin' Anni said...

Oh my goodness, oh my goodness. I don't know whether to cry or smile on this one...it's beautiful, it's touching...it's so filled with truths!

Love it.

This is my 55 this week!

[if you decide to stop by, scroll down below my Show n tell, as always, to find my FF55]

Have a glorious weekend.

Mojo said...

I heard background music with this one. I believe it was Bach's "Sheep May Safely Graze". Beautiful.

chitowngreg said...

Really nice. Thanks and have a great weekend!

John's comments said...

Nicely crafted poem. Here's my rather gory tale

inspiredsyntax said...

as I read this all I could think about is my prayer time with God. this is a beautiful piece!

~IS
My 55 http://inspiredsyntax.wordpress.com/2010/03/26/pay-it-forward/

sarah said...

from the heart of someone who loves running alone in the woods...I love this. ☺

Felicitas said...

Gorgeous! What a beautiful portrait of peace and love you have painted in just 55 words.

Susan said...

Your words once again resonate with such power of faith. Blessings to you this holy week ahead.

Hope you have a sec to read my 55 and let me know what you think.

Jingle said...

what inspirational post!
you take us moon walking!
Happy Friday!

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/25/flash-friday-55-i-am-a-jolly-blogger/

mine is up!
thank you for the attention and fun feedback!

you rock!

hope said...

I love how that photo looks like an outdoor chapel. Nice work!

Paula said...

speaking silence! Wonderful. Hugs to you