Friday, March 19, 2010

Friday 3/19/10 - "DANCING INTO THE HEAVENS"




FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55


"DANCING INTO THE HEAVENS"


Born in a seashore village
Bereft of refinements of any kind
The sea played mystical magical music to her
Mind, body, and soul swayed
She bounded boulder to boulder
Years passed
She pranced rock to rock
One day a pirouette emerged and as she twirled
Off into the sky she soared
The heavens above opened

Prayer Girl
(Photo credit: Re Creation of Above the Ocean by Dreamypunk@deviantart.com)


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17 comments:

Enchanted Oak said...

Oh, PG, this is a mystical, magical poem. I love the images! That final lifting off into the heavens is just beautiful. Good work!

chitowngreg said...

Nice. Thanks and have a good weekend!

Shadow said...

mystical, magical indeed, i love it!

Syd said...

I'm glad that she danced.

Kathy M. said...

I love this! Thanks for sharing.

Lulda Casadaga said...

This is lovely...and oh how I wish I lived by the sea and could jump from boulder to boulder! :) But I'll wait a bit before I fly off into the sky...:D

Superfluous Brunette said...

I loved that she danced into the heavens. Very beautiful, I can feel myself there.

Monkey Man said...

I like that. Made me smile.

Buzzard said...

The music of the sea. It's time for a trip to the ocean.

Thanks


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Kristin H. said...

I like it, PG. Magical, indeed :)

Felicitas said...

What a beautiful piece, PG. I LOVE this 55. It has heart and soul and depth.

Scott said...

wow that was really nice :-)

Just Be Real/God Whispers In The Wind said...

PG very nice. Thank you. And thank you as always for your encouragement to me. Blessings dear one.

Brian Miller said...

dancing is the best way to go...great to be home for her i bet. smiles. a bit late making the 55 rounds...hope you have a great weekend!

Kim A. said...

I'm late on my 55s today but I am a lover of the ocean so your 55 today really got me wishing my feet were in the sand in the OBX. Absolutely beautiful 55 for a sunny day here.

♥namaste♥

Secretia said...

As a child I worried about something like that happening.

Secretia

Susan at Stony River said...

What a lovely verse and image it paints - I love it!