Thursday, February 4, 2010

Friday 2/5/10 - "STOP THE WORLD"




FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55


"STOP THE WORLD"


Stop the world and get me off!

Stop my mind, that racing grind.
Lift the loathsome blogger's block that hinders free word flow.

Done with seeking self, a constant chore.
Tired! Let futile struggles cease.

Stop the world.
Give all to God.

Hear me calling.
Help me Father.
This child is suffering.
Heed my cry.

Prayer Girl
(Photo credit: See the WORLD by meidy89@deviantart.com)

Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.

14 comments:

Kim A. said...

Oh yes, the racing mind. I am better than I was. I have a ways to go. Great 55 and pictures!

Have a warm and serene weekend, dear.

namaste

Brian Miller said...

He will hear. He will answer. sometimes life feels like a merry go round, eh? nice 55 and great pic!

Shadow said...

i need the world to stop right now.

Syd said...

Sad one for this Friday. I hope that the world keeps orbiting and spinning.

Garnet said...

Sweet! That sounds like 'one prayer'. Beautiful sentiment.

Mama Zen said...

Yes, yes, please!

Just Be Real said...

Alrighty then! :)

♥ Boomer ♥ said...

Beautiful, Prayer Girl! ♥ May God answer your prayer.

Susan said...

When it is too much to bear you often have to hand over the reigns to someone. Great 55! Thanks for visiting mine!

G-Man said...

PG...
We've had this conversation before.
You never have writers block.
What you call writers block, the rest of the world calls creative brilliance!
Beautiful 55 My Dear.
Such a Class Act!
Thank You for such a fantastic piece of Art.
You Rock Baby....Have a Wonderful Week-End...Galen

Enchanted Oak said...

Prayer Girl, here's one suggestion for unblocking bloggers block: Write a post about the simple things that make life wonderful for you. Then do my "Simple Things Challenge" and help raise my donation to the medical clinic and women's sewing circle in Haiti.

For everyone who posts about simple pleasures and then visits my blog to tell me about it this weekend, my family will donate $2 to Heartline Ministries. It's an excuse to think about the simple joys of life and help a suffering city in the bargain.
I hope I see you this weekend, PG.

Ronda Laveen said...

Just ask and He is here. Lovely surrender, Prayer Girl.

Felicitas said...

Sometimes we really do just need a break from everything. I've felt pretty much the same way this past month. Best advice: be kind to yourself.

Terrific 55 PG!

Findon said...

If you have Blog block PG I asure would just like to read about your day. Plain and simple. I love the minutae of daily life.