Thursday, February 25, 2010

Friday 2/26/10 - "DISCOVERY"




FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55


"DISCOVERY"


What planet was she from?

She thought, "Where are we?" and her companion then asked, "Where are we?"

An irresistible urge to place her hands on her friend's back compelled her to do so and the labored breathing became normal.

These things frightened her and she hid them.

Then she discovered she came from God.


Prayer Girl
(Photo credit: I can still see with my left by dawns13@deviantart.com)


Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow readers.

20 comments:

Brian Miller said...

nice 55. so much i hid...

mine is up!

g-man said...

An Epiphiny!!!
Excellent 55 PG...
You are a true Child of God.
Thank You for this very uplifting contribution My Dear, You Rock!!
Have a Wonderful Week-End...Galen

Vodka Logic said...

where are we.. good question.

Shadow said...

the magic touch...

Hootin' Anni said...

I'm not sure this is fiction! Great 55.

DAMSEL IN DISTRESS 55 for me this week. [scroll down a bit to find 'er]

Susan said...

Very nice 55. We all hide a little too much I think.

I’m up right HERE

Peter Stone said...

What planet was she from indeed! Freaky photo too.

My 55 is Love returned

Sherry said...

Discovery is a wonderful thing - great 55!

Sherry

Lou said...

I'm glad you are using your "powers" for the good!

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...

Beautiful!

VE said...

Yeah God...

Here's my 55 here

Kay said...

good ol' faithful :) nicely done.

Buzzard said...

And let there be enlightenment!

Thank you.

Mine's here: The Loft

Cat said...

Yes!
Good work! Have a great weekend.

Paula said...

Incredible picture to the "where are we".
Needed to see this today to sooth my soul. Hugs and a wonderful weekend

Monkey Man said...

Powerful 55. My 55 is HERE .

Susan said...

Great story. I am going to give it a go. Wish me luck. Blessings PG and thanks as always for being out there!

Akannie said...

Mmm...good one, PG....

And we've all come from there, haven't we?

Enchanted Oak said...

This is mystical, my dear. Very nicely done.

Kim A. said...

I like it!! Very ethereal.

Namaste