Sunday, October 3, 2010

Monday 10/4/10 - "TAKE ME WITH YOU FOREVER" - Micro-Fiction Monday




MICRO-FICTION MONDAY



"TAKE ME WITH YOU FOREVER"


She longed for love from above
Loves grew in her heart only to part

A miracle arrived, love thrived
She prayed, "Take me with you forever"
(140)

Prayer Girl


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25 comments:

Syd said...

Nice PG. Forever is a God word.

Sylvia K said...

Oh, lovely! It is such a romantic looking picture, isn't it! Great take for the day! Hope you have a wonderful week!

Sylvia

G-Man said...

Beautifully Romantic...
I got caught up as well on your last three...
Loved them all....G

Brian Miller said...

forever and then some...nice...

Peggy said...

I love true love stories.
Nice change! Thank you PG!

Diane said...

Very romantic and lovely! :O)

Book Bird Dog said...

A lovely fantasy!

Pat said...

At last she found true love. So-o-o romantic! Lovely poetry.

Ms.Daisy said...

Very nice PG! I do like your poetry.




~Jean

ninotaziz said...

I love romance, Prayer Girl. Thank you!

Deborah said...

Wonderfully romantic, I loved this :o)

moondustwriter said...

and sad my dear. The longing is on wings


hugs from the moon

Jim said...

and they lived happily ever after. :)

Nice one, P.G. I wish I could write mushy romance. :) Is there a school or class for that?
Yes, for sure there would be a book of "how to's" on it.
..

Ellie said...

Oh, so romantic. Beautiful!

Have a great week x

SouthLakesMom said...

Very sweetly romantic. I'm sure you know that only the love from Above satisfies...

Scott said...

mmm happy ending no doubt :)

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Wonderful one PG, Love conquers all.

EG Wow said...

The dream of most young girls! Hope it all works out!

Abhilasha-The Desire said...

Forever and more... very romantic

septembermom said...

So sweet. Lovely to think of on a dreary Monday morning. Thank you!

hope said...

Looks like she got her wish!

Wanda's Wings said...

To be with God would be great.

sarah said...

nice one....nothing like love to break through

Susan at Stony River said...

I could use a miracle about now -- and I loved this story!

Dianne said...

my sentiments, you captured it all. accessible story, conflict, and an answer...perfectly written.