Thursday, April 15, 2010

Friday 4/16/10 - "THE WOOD"



FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55


"THE WOOD"

Escape from the watchful eyes of her family, a precious delight
Wandering endlessly, dancing, waltzing through the velvet wood
Imagination flowed, willed stronger with all her might
And as she turned on tiptoe light, became all that she could
One with all the richest, vibrant views within her sight
She like butterfly and flower bright

Prayer Girl

(Photo credit: Sounds of joy and innocence by Luna2003@deviantart.com)

Flash Fiction Friday 55 is hosted by G-Man.

20 comments:

G-Man said...

You are just too much...
Simply Beautiful!
What a treasure you are PG.
Thanks for your weekly Brilliance!
And...Have a Kick Ass Week-End!
Galen

sheri... said...

ah, this was beautiful! childlike but with so much intent...really nice 55!

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Very nice. I love the picture and your take on it. What a beautiful picture you painted.
Mine is up.
hugs
shakira

Brian Miller said...

beautiful 55...she like a butterfly...so carefree...love it!

järnebrand said...

Beautiful. Don't you just love dancing in the woods? :) The trees are such a great audience. They don't even mind if you sing a little too while you're at it... :)
I loved this, PG. Well done.
Hugs/ Jo.

Hootin' Anni said...

This was AWESOME! I know, I know...the word awesome is much over-used, but yours this week is just that...awesome. I love the velvet description. I was so there!!!

Loved your 55.

Sunrise in the City ---as always, scroll down below my Show n Tell. Hope you're having a terrific Friday!!!

Maha said...

It made me smile :) I totally agree with G-MAn, simply beautiful. I loved the exotic places your words made me travel to.

Just Be Real/God Whispers In The Wind said...

Innocence I read. Thanks PG. Blessings.

Sherry said...

You painted the picture with words! How uplifting and innocent!

John's comments said...

We do a workshop exercise based on how far your child, you, your parents and their parents could roam to play, It usually shrinks from the river on the other side of the woods to a bedroom. Shocking. Late for me, this week, what with work demanding I do what I'm paid to do. I mean, what a cheek. My 55 story here

Syd said...

Nice. I like the lightness of this.

Monkey Man said...

A light and happy 55. Made me smile and do a little dance. My 55 iss HERE .

5thsister said...

Absolutely lovely! Glad I stopped by!

Dulce said...

Just BRILLIANT!
and so is the picture!
:)

chitowngreg said...

Wow, whether it's six words or 55, you're something else, my friend. My first attempt at a 55 is also up.

Leslie said...

Awww so sweet. That's so little girlish

Love your 55!!!

cheers
Moondustwriter

Jingle said...

classical 55.
love it so very much!

clean and crazy said...

this is so free and whimsical i just love it. great 55

PattiKen said...

That was just lovely!

My 55 is up here.

Vodka Logic said...

"escape from watchful eyes" don't we all wish for that sometimes.


I know its late but my 55 is up