Tuesday, May 21, 2013

5/21/13 - I DON'T REMEMBER





I  
DON'T 
REMEMBER

Penetration, conception, origination 
Big bang - instant flash of light

I DON'T REMEMBER

Floating, drifting, peaceful in the deep
Rhythmic pulses surrounding around

I DON'T REMEMBER

Thrusting downward, fighting, pushing 
Towards the world's bright light

I DON'T REMEMBER

OR DO I?

Prayer Girl

Posted for:
dVerse Poets Pub 
OLN week #97

6 comments:

Brian Miller said...

you remember enough, if not the first birth then perhaps the next...smiles...good to see you...

and will be good to see you come end of the week as well...

Steve E said...

First one since when--September? And a GoooD one it is. How do you write a volume of story in under a dozen lines?

Really good, Honey. Waiting for your next one. Can't stop now.
LOVE and PEACE.

Linda Rogers said...

What a powerful message in your poem.Beautiful writing...

Claudia said...

i wish we could remember and maybe in a way it's in us and we do...

Syd said...

Happy birthday, Anna. Maybe something in me remembers, and it may become clearer at death. Who knows?

henna ink said...

Oh, I like this. "Or do I?" I like where this leads my thoughts.