FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
"DOORS"She turned the key in her door, opened then closed it, and knew instantly something was terribly wrong.
She smelled fresh paint. Why? She turned and saw white walls, strange furniture. Not her home.
Panic!
She flung the door open - another exact same door, yanked again - another.
She ran to a door across the room.
TO BE CONTINUED
Prayer Girl (Photo credit: doors by mrkillzo) Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
18 comments:
Fun. Can't wait for the continuation. My 55 will be up in the morning.
wow. feel like i am trapped in an m c escher picture. interested to see where this one goes...great 55.
You could keep an old(er) man living a whole extra year writing serials like that, PG.
Yep you are a real Peep...
Peace...and love!
I do so love a cliffhanger ... I'll be back next week, salivating for more :-)
My 55 is up HERE. Enjoy your weekend.
Chef Kar
Oh my - a fresh take on Alice in Wonderland? Intriguing . . .
Oh oh..... waiting for the next installment....
To be continued? Oh.....man, you had me going. Now I hafta wait 'til next week.....
Mine's posted below my Friday Show n Tell...it's kinda creepy this week.
Here's the link
Click for my 55
Hey! This is good... but unfair. A need to know what happens next arises...
Good 55!!
Have a nice weekend!
this sounds like a recurring nightmare i have had before!!
I look forward to reading the continuation. My post is up. Have a great weekend.
Oh I can tell this is going to be good because it already is!!!
You know...I HATE serial 55's.
They don't tell the story in 55 words!!
This is Flash Friday 55 NOT Flash Friday 110, or Flash Friday 165, or Flash Friday....(get the point?)
But anyway, all that crap aside..
Terrific 55(?) PG!!!!!
You are such a great talent, and beautiful soul that how can an overfed, long-haired, leaping gnome such as myself, ever disparage anything that you do?
I can't....And you are free to use any format you wish My Dear..:P
Have a Wonderful Week-End...G
Fine 55- You have my attention
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
I love the ones with a longer story line - suspense!@
gahhhhh don't you know what immediate gratification junkies we are???!!!
Suspense suspense!!!!
(((calming breath)))
Something else to look forward to :oD
There is something oh so mysterous about what's behind the door...great job! Look forward to more!!
this sounds like one of my dreams ( Nightmares?) :D
Uh oh...another continuing saga. Your last on the Box was great. I'm in suspense already.
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