FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
"WARP SPEED"Life is moving at warp speed. Somehow I'm keeping up. It must be the grace of God.
One family household full of a lifetime of remembrances has united with a single daughter's household full of a shorter lifetime of mementos. The walls are bursting at their seams.
The house breathes in, exhales, it all fits.
Prayer Girl
Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
26 comments:
the last line captures the essence well. remember to breathe yourself and hang on to the grace. nice 55!
mine is up!
Nicely told! It may all fit, but there will be tension just the same. I hope single-daughter is okay. It's not usually good news that leads to this situation.
I'm up, too.
-smarmoofus
I too really like the last line. It is so true.
Have to say I'm with Brian and Wanda ~ your last line clinched it with poise and gratitude.
You'll find my 55 ~ Skipping Stones is posted.
Hugs to you,
~Chef Kar
I really enjoyed this 55, so alive, so full of movement!!
Great pic. Great post. What every one else said about the last line.
Ho Hum...Typical Prayer Girl.
Creative, Beautiful, and Brilliant!
What an awesome 55...
Time is indeed moving at warp speed, and memories abound at Chez G-Man..You Rock The Planet!
And most of Broward County...
Have a Fun-Filled Week-End...G
I absolutely LOVE, actually "feel it" (after all, I live here, too?)--the house breathing, long deep slow breaths....
Love and PEACE! Have a Grrrreat weekend.
My 55 is up also
The House breathes in, exhales, it all fits. Yes it certainly does. Great 55 PG. Blessings dear one.
...beautiful 55! family will always be family..
Sounds some comfy and loving. Beautiful PG.
I'm speechless. This is one awesome 55. It depicts family perfectly. Love it.
Have a terrorific Halloween tomorrow---
My 55 is a two-parter this week...
Trick or Treats HERE
wow this photo fits this write perfect.. I to love the last line, it feels good when all slows down and everything and everyone fits PERFECT!!
Perfect 55.. enjoy your weekend. HAPPY HALLOWEEN.. SMILES
a full house. full of love?!?! surely.
I too love the last line. This is just one great 55 and I pray that it keeps fitting.
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.
Perfect 55 depiction of a present situation.Loved it.
Happy Halloween
There's always room for the ones we love. Beautiful 55. Happy Halloween to you...enjoy your weekend!
this is so beautifully written. I can see it. I can feel it. Tons of hugs. Sarah
I love this 55, it makes me want to move in!!! Hey any space left? Have a great Halloween weekend!
It will work itself out in time. Maybe a few bumps but enjoy the experience.
I join the cheer - the last line.
Love to you and a great weekend
I too, love the last line. Beautifully written, PG.
I feel like things going to slow, I guess i cant Waite for the day I can be free
Dynamic image. Especially the last line. I like this very much. My 55 is here.
Wow that photo is the perfect example of life in the fast lane. :)
I really enjoyed this one. Have a great weekend!
great 55, glad to see you all are fitting nicely. sorry only a few kids on Halloween hope you enjoyed the movies, i love the moment of silence prayer by mother Theresa!! I read your posts backwards to Flash Friday as I didn't have time to post, let alone carve my pumpkins!!
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