FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
"ANOTHER DOOR"She flung open the door.
Relief flooded her!
It opened onto a backyard patio, but as she looked both directions she saw identical houses, identical patios.
She heard the rumble of an engine.
Her heart was exploding from her body.
She jerked; eyes flew open, and awoke with her kitty nestled, purring by her neck.
Prayer Girl
Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
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16 comments:
Prrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect....
Lovely 55 Prayer Girl!
You have free reign to use any format you wish.
Thank You for being such a beautiful soul.......G
nice. i like it. the kitten at the end gave it a nice warm twist. happy friday!
Awwww, too cute!
Awwww so ever sweet! Blessings.
Awwwwwwww ~ such a cute kitty. And such a happy ending to the story of scary doors!
My 55 is posted here.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Chef Kar
I love a 55 with a little mystery.
Nice surprise ending.
Great 55
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.
captivating!
i love your 55!! recurring dreams?
What a surprise ending! I'm glad it was just a bad dream. You are so creative with these 55ers. I think that purrrfect is the right word! Happy Friday PG!
"Honey, what's happening?" Oh, nothing, Sweetie...
"Well, did you have a nice nap?" Ohhh, my--YES!
PEACE...and love that cat with the fleas! And YOU!!!
--grin!
My cats sleep on my back each night now. They just want warmth.
Love the kitty twist! You have such a way with words! Sorry I havent been around lately but now Iam up and about again, catching up with reading my fav blogs :-)) Hugs to you.
What a dream to wake from---but what a wonderful way to wake! I enjoyed going from relief to tension and back again; loved it!
This is brilliant. I love the sounds of kittens purring. One time I was napping and had two of my four kittens next to me at the time purring, and it was really that joyous source of miracle from the universe. I loved it and this brought that moment back to me...thank you!
Love
Gabi
Ooooh.. this is SO beautiful and the picture of the cat, awesome... who was going to expect such a great end in this?
HUGS
Suprise endings are the best!
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