FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
"ON HER KNEES"The city of pathos, loss, sadness stretched out before her.
Where boundaries once were placed and safe, now broken lives and homes remained.
She sat straight and staid by the flowing water, lost in thought, remembering the past now gone.
She heard prayers. On bended knee she joined the woman in the sky in supplication.
Prayer Girl
Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow readers.
17 comments:
beautiful 55...i think i may join them. smiles.
my 55 is up!
Love it PG. A city on its knees, but instead a lonely woman praying for her city. Blessings.
Wonderful words, lovely picture!
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shakira
Very nice descriptions.
I’m up right HERE
just beautiful and bittersweet. it is reminding me of one thing- HOPE!!
PG...
You are amazingly perfect at what you do!
YOU are God's gift to those of us that love Fridays round these here parts...Thank You.
BTW....You Rock Sista!!
Have a Wonderful Week-End...Galen
Great picture.....
And ..."she heard prayers". Love it.
May we all hear prayers....
A humble prayer in troubled times. Excellent.
Ethereal. I love how the words flow from the picture. The feminine mystique lives on.
have a spring-y friday!
Namaste
I love how she was connected and heard "prayers". The photo goes perfectly also! Have a lovely weekend!
wow. this is so powerful...the picture, the words....
And wanted to tell you...my friend who was so violent...ending up giving his heart to God and although he still fights with that violent streak...he's changed so much
Amazing picture, triste and hopeful at the same time
This is lovely!
Very deep 55! ummm...we should all pray!! :) Did you create the artwork?
A sad one today. But filled with much hope.
that is such a beautiful communion!
Powerful. And an amazing picture to go with it!
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