FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
"SILENCE"Silence
Hushed hallowed space
Outside sounds all around
Of birds and breezes
Of running in the rain
Inside total silence reigns
Exquisite interior quiet
Peace and prayer exist
There in that universal union
One with God
All is still, sweet silence
No note, no tune, no word
Just miracle muted music pure
Love's power sure
Prayer Girl
(Photo credits:
still winter by luvne32
silence by vebri rizcha carolin@deviantart.com)
Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
25 comments:
miracles muted music...such sweet silence...great 55!
mine is up!
PG...
It's obvious where you get your inspiration.
Every one of your stories reads like a beautiful prayer.
Prayer Girl!!
Thanks for playing today, and have a Quiet but Kick Ass Week-End!!
G
This is gorgeous!
I like the silence after a snow. Luckily, there isn't any snow forecast.
AWESOME!!
Simply wonderful, especially loved the last line about the miracle muted music pure.
My 55 is Twisting Roots
That's a lusciously quiet meditation, with a stunning photo, too. I can almost hear the faint tones of a violin.
Hey PG...this poem is EXCELLENT! I am happy to see you are inspired once again to write your "55" in that genre. Actuall I loved it--I love silence, except for key-sounds tapping in front of my computer.
PEACE. Love.
I know the peace of that silence. There is nothing sweeter.
perfect soothings silence! i love this pg!
Great one PG. I can always remember snow muffling the sound of things. Blessings.
Very nice perfect for an early am read... lovely images to go with the poem
No note, no tune, no word...
Silence described in the most beautiful and peaceful way.
I loved this.
/Jo
My 55 is about Earth Hour...
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness. I don't know whether to cry or smile on this one...it's beautiful, it's touching...it's so filled with truths!
Love it.
This is my 55 this week!
[if you decide to stop by, scroll down below my Show n tell, as always, to find my FF55]
Have a glorious weekend.
I heard background music with this one. I believe it was Bach's "Sheep May Safely Graze". Beautiful.
Really nice. Thanks and have a great weekend!
Nicely crafted poem. Here's my rather gory tale
as I read this all I could think about is my prayer time with God. this is a beautiful piece!
~IS
My 55 http://inspiredsyntax.wordpress.com/2010/03/26/pay-it-forward/
from the heart of someone who loves running alone in the woods...I love this. ☺
Gorgeous! What a beautiful portrait of peace and love you have painted in just 55 words.
Your words once again resonate with such power of faith. Blessings to you this holy week ahead.
Hope you have a sec to read my 55 and let me know what you think.
what inspirational post!
you take us moon walking!
Happy Friday!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/25/flash-friday-55-i-am-a-jolly-blogger/
mine is up!
thank you for the attention and fun feedback!
you rock!
I love how that photo looks like an outdoor chapel. Nice work!
speaking silence! Wonderful. Hugs to you
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