FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
"SAMENESS"She felt invisible, another identical clone in a universe of sameness.
She, the girl next door, the man above, the woman beneath her, all carbon copy people.
She didn't think "their" lives were meaningless, but hers was totally irrelevant.
Then, God softly whispered,
"I knew "YOU" before your birth. You are unique in all eternity."
Prayer Girl
(Photo credit: Neighborhood by kgeri@deviantart.com)
Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
26 comments:
This was a very nice piece and I love the picture that you put with it. Just perfect!
I’m up right HERE
Psalm 139 - truth.
BART’S HEART – OVER THE MOON
This My Dear was your best one yet!
Another example of your shining brilliance.
Superb 55!!!
Thanks for this beautiful and uplifting story...
There...I've 'exposed' how I feel.
G
Simply perfect, especially how you wrote "YOU" in capitals.
My 55 is School Lunch
This one got to me.I so needed to hear this.
Good blog, difficult to read this and not realize you have much writing talent.
Same ol' same ol'.....
Great message and loved the pic too! Thanks again for praying for J and I!
What a wonderful acknowledgment that I matter..me, one tiny speck in a beach full of other specks!
♥Namaste♥
amen. makes you feel special, huh? wonderful 55...
mine is up!
I like this one a great deal, PG!
beautiful 55, so nice to stop by and read again
a good message to remember...
Great work PG.
We are all unique on the inside. A lot of people just tend to hide behind the same kind of surface, though. I loved your 55 and the photo, too. Thanks for sharing. /Jo.
beautiful! I love this picture and poem got right to my heart and soul!
Very well crafted. (All of Gods children)
My 55: A Familiar Face
Your post here means a lot to me, and this is my first visit, I'm following you now.
I didn't realize that what I composed today was 55 words, I never tried to write an exact length-ever.
Thanks for visiting my blog!
Secretia
I'm glad that she didn't jump. We are each unique.
So true. We may share common characteristics or beliefs but we are all unique. Nicely done. My 55 is HERE .
Great 55 PG. I hope you are going to have a wonderful weekend. My 55 is up.
Nice, really nice. Thanks and have a good weekend!
That was real great. I could totally relate to it, how you feel you are just another copy.
Mine is up!!
Yay God! What truth was in this -- it's so easy to lose ourselves in this world of carbon-copy people. Beautiful 55!
A great thought we all need to remember, thanks.
my 55 is up
oh, i just love this! it's so true, the monotonous daily activity can leave one feeling 'ordinary' yet we are all so varied and unique and wonderful! Have a great weekend!
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