FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
Escape from the watchful eyes of her family, a precious delight
Wandering endlessly, dancing, waltzing through the velvet wood
Imagination flowed, willed stronger with all her might
And as she turned on tiptoe light, became all that she could
One with all the richest, vibrant views within her sight
She like butterfly and flower bright
Prayer Girl
(Photo credit: Sounds of joy and innocence by Luna2003@deviantart.com)
Flash Fiction Friday 55 is hosted by G-Man.
20 comments:
You are just too much...
Simply Beautiful!
What a treasure you are PG.
Thanks for your weekly Brilliance!
And...Have a Kick Ass Week-End!
Galen
ah, this was beautiful! childlike but with so much intent...really nice 55!
Very nice. I love the picture and your take on it. What a beautiful picture you painted.
Mine is up.
hugs
shakira
beautiful 55...she like a butterfly...so carefree...love it!
Beautiful. Don't you just love dancing in the woods? :) The trees are such a great audience. They don't even mind if you sing a little too while you're at it... :)
I loved this, PG. Well done.
Hugs/ Jo.
This was AWESOME! I know, I know...the word awesome is much over-used, but yours this week is just that...awesome. I love the velvet description. I was so there!!!
Loved your 55.
Sunrise in the City ---as always, scroll down below my Show n Tell. Hope you're having a terrific Friday!!!
It made me smile :) I totally agree with G-MAn, simply beautiful. I loved the exotic places your words made me travel to.
Innocence I read. Thanks PG. Blessings.
You painted the picture with words! How uplifting and innocent!
We do a workshop exercise based on how far your child, you, your parents and their parents could roam to play, It usually shrinks from the river on the other side of the woods to a bedroom. Shocking. Late for me, this week, what with work demanding I do what I'm paid to do. I mean, what a cheek. My 55 story here
Nice. I like the lightness of this.
A light and happy 55. Made me smile and do a little dance. My 55 iss HERE .
Absolutely lovely! Glad I stopped by!
Just BRILLIANT!
and so is the picture!
:)
Wow, whether it's six words or 55, you're something else, my friend. My first attempt at a 55 is also up.
Awww so sweet. That's so little girlish
Love your 55!!!
cheers
Moondustwriter
classical 55.
love it so very much!
this is so free and whimsical i just love it. great 55
That was just lovely!
My 55 is up here.
"escape from watchful eyes" don't we all wish for that sometimes.
I know its late but my 55 is up
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