FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
"BETWEEN THE ATOMS"
It slipped into my soul on breath of gentle breeze
Arrived on unseen angels' whispering willowy wings
Came captured in the wispy Queen Anne's airy lace
Was layered in the vibrant colors bright, as butterflies alight
Thank God my gaze was held between the atoms' silent spiraling spaces small
For there, was love, in all
Prayer Girl
Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
24 comments:
I remember how much I like Queen Anne's lace flowers as a kid. I don't see it much in this area--I guess that it's not the right soil or maybe it's too hot. Thanks for the reminder.
your words far outshine the beauty even in that picture. sigh. marvelous 55.
mine is up!
And there is love in all you do! Exquisite 55! Do the colors keep changing here or is it just my imagination?
this does take me back, to the northwest corner of America, we used to go up to Washington every year, via the I-5. man what a view the drive was going up the coast then jotting over to the grapevine. great 55, mines up too.
PG...You are One Classy Lady!
Beautiful story, picture, and thoughts!
Thank You so much for honoring us.
You Make Friday's Fun.
Have a Wonderful Week-End...G
Hey this is really GooooD!
I enjoyed the alliteration. A fine, fun 55. My 55 is up and HERE.
This is beautiful PG! I love the colorful butterflies and flowers...refreshing :)
Absolutely beautiful PG! Thank you! Blessings for your Friday!
what a picture you've painted!
Simply beautiful!!!
This is ONE PERFECT 55.
Mine is Pepper Sprayed today. Click Here and scroll down beyond my Friday's Show n Tell to find my 55. Have a glorious weekend.
I felt the flutter of lace and wings.
A peek into a free soul in 55 words.
Well done
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
Beautiful PG, again a fabulous picture painted with heartfelt words.
My 55 is posted: Flash 55 ~ Awakening
PG...how amazing this piece is, it's elegant and peaceful wording is amazing, and reflects the hands and the heart that writes it...thank you as always!!!!
Love you
G
So beuatiful. A fresh brise between the atoms. Love Queen Anne flowers. Have a wonderful weekend
A nice reminder of the love that is free for all our enjoyment.
Love it!
WOW this is awesome.. I to love Queen Anne's lace.
A touch of class from a classy lady. have a great weekend.. HUGS
This is just lovely, PG!
this is so gentle like you. and the picture is amazing. The colors are brilliant. Your words, your blog, your pictures say so much about ho you are...thanks PG. Sarah
I think I will today...this is nice. I find your light in your words.
hugs, mile 191
Between the atoms, you found a living peace and a living love. This was wonderful. I added you to my blog roll so I can see when you post.
That is really a great picture that you paint!
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