FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
"NIGHTMARE"
Midnight nightmare found me inside an active alcoholic's brain.
To the right - masses of twisted tissue of guilt, shame, remorse, dread, despair.
To the left - locked compartments, no apparent keys, filled with problems of love, jobs, finances, health.
Total confusion and denial reigned.
My eyes opened and brilliant light entered my sane mind. Thank God.
Prayer Girl
Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
Midnight nightmare found me inside an active alcoholic's brain.
To the right - masses of twisted tissue of guilt, shame, remorse, dread, despair.
To the left - locked compartments, no apparent keys, filled with problems of love, jobs, finances, health.
Total confusion and denial reigned.
My eyes opened and brilliant light entered my sane mind. Thank God.
Prayer Girl
Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
21 comments:
Amen Sister...
You write so beautifully and eloquent. We are the ones that are blessed...With You!!
Excellent 55 PG...
Thank You for visiting and supporting the other contributers as well....:-)
Have a Wonderful Week-End...G
I think you were in my head! Great55! jeNN
This is a "classic" 55 PG. You are getting SO good at this, IMO. A great short story.....and picture to match.
PEACE!
I think this one sounds more real than fiction! And I join you in gratitude. Thanks, as always, for your kind insight and comments. I just love when you share your experience. Hugs and happy Friday!
Brilliant PG. Your words hit the meaning so very well. Blessings dear one....
Your 55 words are always so inspiring to this AA "newbie". Thank you for the reminder that G-d is always there to help us sort it all out.
Take a gander at my 55 for the week.
Ciao,
Chef Kar
Anna, let me hug you. How beautiful and I agree with G-Man, we are blessed with you. Love from this side of the pond.
love this. Hey just want to tell you, you're awesome. thank you for being you, for your strength, and for your kindness. Sarah
Always wondered what was in there.
Great 55
Mine is posted
HERE.
Excellent!!!
Mine is posted HERE...as always, scroll down below my Friday's show n tell.
I'm glad you've escaped that nightmare - well done. Health and happiness to you.
Awesome 55 PG. Perfect description!
great 55, glad you woke up!!
This is good PG, and the photo outstanding,,, thank God you woke up...
I don't like nightmares that involve alcoholism. I'm glad that you and so many others don't live like that nightmare.
You are so very talented with words. Great 55!
Wow! That is a nightmare!
wow, very heavy, but beautiful. great job, pg. :0) i'm at ramblings if you have the time. i've been slacking, but it's my intention to visit every single ff this wknd :0)
Wonderful 55 and picture. Thanks for sharing.
you've got it.
wow! this is so well said. You so aptly describe the state of an alcoholic's mind!
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