Every Friday, compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. if you want to join in the fun and games and give it a try...post your story and report to the boss G-Man!
THE BOX - Part III
Here she is, his marionette, trying desperately to pull her own string, reach out for that pink phone.
Suddenly it rings. Fear courses through - dark and quick. She reaches, snatches it up.
Hears, "Remember me? We met at the coffee shop last week. Wanna try one of the meetings, twelve steps I told you about?"
Prayer Girl
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Note: The following was LAST WEEK'S "55 Flash Fiction Friday":
"THE BOX - Continued"
Her life had collapsed and restricted her more with each passing year.
The occasional yes when she really meant no was easier than the creation of discord. Surely there was no harm in this.
However, the day finally came when it was always a yes, never a no, and she had become a lost puppet.
Suddenly it rings. Fear courses through - dark and quick. She reaches, snatches it up.
Hears, "Remember me? We met at the coffee shop last week. Wanna try one of the meetings, twelve steps I told you about?"
Prayer Girl
_______________________________
Note: The following was LAST WEEK'S "55 Flash Fiction Friday":
"THE BOX - Continued"
Her life had collapsed and restricted her more with each passing year.
The occasional yes when she really meant no was easier than the creation of discord. Surely there was no harm in this.
However, the day finally came when it was always a yes, never a no, and she had become a lost puppet.
11 comments:
Sounds like fun, I want to try it.
Graet as usual PG. Thank you for sharing these Friday wonders! Blessings.
Well written Flash. Enjoyed it. Just found G-Man and had a go myself.
Your 55 is continuing on making us wonder what the next installment will be.
Mine is posted today [scroll below my Friday's Show n Tell] ---it's entitled "_ _ _ _ _ becomes you". Have a great weekend.
Ha, PG, very clever way to get the message out there. You are funny!
I'm hooked on the 55 now myself!
This gets better and better,
A little bit of you in the story.
My 55 is ready for today.
You humans dink too much.
I have never seen a drunken dragon.
Good 55
Our 55 is ready.
PG..
Excellent 55 again my dear.
I'm glad you are so hooked on such a fun and creative and easy expression of your talented brain.
Thanks for visiting, and have a Wonderful Week-End...G
nice collaboration of stories, I like where this is going!! Just posted my 55.
Excellent 55, really excellent! :)
great 55. i'm loving the storyline.
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