"MY MIND"Mind goes "bong", "bong"
- - Back and Forth
- - From This to That
- - From Here to There
This means:
It's all about me
- - Nothing is about me
Give me isolation to the extreme (stay at home, watch T.V., read, sleep, T.V., read, sleep)
- - Give me friends to love, talk to, enjoy time with, be with, comfort, be comforted by
Give me simplicity to the max, life in black and white
- - Give me life in technicolor
Retirement from blogging
- - Coming out of retirement
Inside a mind can be a
dangerous place to spend time!
I step as if outside myself
Staring in to see
The many simple landmarks
Known specially to me
But before me stretches long and steep
A passage of debris
A cluttered, junk-filled corridor
Items tossed disorderly
A faint glow penetrates the waste
Spreads slowly to the fore
Then with a sudden gale storm force
The light sweeps clear the way
And the passageway's left filled and bright
The wasteland's disappeared
The tunnel way my oft-trod route again
A known and trusted way
--Prayer Girl
(Photo credit: Shut me up by Subtle Emotions Club)
10 comments:
I have to admit that the poets who are here in the blogosphere amaze me; this poem just blew my socks off; I read it three times; once outloud to my DH. Thank you so much!
Love,
G
I liked this.
Gosh "Inside my mind can be a dangerous place" really spoke to me. I needed to hear this today. Thanks PG. ML, Jen
what a brilliant poem!
Gabriella, does DH mean "Designated Hitter"? If ya don't know, ask your DH -GRIN!
Prayer Girl, I've known you for nearly twenty years, and you still amaze me with the talents I did not see before.
Ya gotta keep on blogging, as embarrassing as it might be, some times.
Love
Your DH. NOT your Designated Hitter!
Beautifully writen! I will keep coming for more. nice meeting you!
I simply love this.
It says so much.
So much.
lol I can relate so much with the isolation read sleep watch tv
Amazing beauty and truth in what you wrote PG - wonderful stuff!
Have a happy new Year with your Designated Hitter - hehehe!
My mind is a very dangerous place to be. Loavely Lovely poem. Thanx.
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